Assignment guidelines:
For this assignment, you are required to analyze the strengths and weaknesses of the following letter in pairs with a classmate and submit your analysis in a 300 words two paragraph document.
(Paragraph one Strengths, Paragraph two weaknesses)
do the strengths only, my partner has done the weaknesses part
Remember that:
1- As a pair your will submit one writing
2- Only two paragraphs are needed - one for the strengths (150 words),and one for weaknesses (150 words).
3-Paragraphs must have unity and flow.
4-You must proofread multiple times for grammar.
5-One person will submit the assignment.
6- The grade you receive will be for both of you.
If you have any questions, please contact me during business hours.
Letter to hiring manager
To: Hiring.Committee@gmail.com
From: procrastinator@gmail.com
Date: Today
Subject: Thank you for the interview
Dear Mr. Jonathan,
Thank you for the really marvelous opportunity to meet you and your colleagues at Starret Engine Company. I really enjoyed touring your facility and talking with all you guys and gals! You have such and AWSOME crew!! Some of the other companies I have visited have been so rigid and uptight that I can not imagine how I would fit in. It is a relief to run into a group of professionals who have a passion for their work as much as you all do .
I know that you must be looking at many other candidates for this position, and I know that some of them will probably be more experienced than I am. But I do want to emphasize that my two-year hitch in the Navy involved a good deal of engineering work. Did I tell you about all my shipboard responsibilities during the interview, or did I forget? I can't remember.
Hit me up within the next week to let me know your decision. I can be reached at 408-877-9080 or my email address which is listed above this email. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanks a lot,
John Smith.