The paper I provided is over some of the paper but the professor said the topic was too broad so that needs to be addressed.

You will submit a rough draft outline of your research paper and tentative annotated bibliography of sources. The bibliography will include a MINIMUM of 7 sources. The outline will include your thesis statement, a brief outline of your introduction/preview, an outline of the main ideas of the paper itself (with supporting information as you have developed it so far), and a brief statement about how you plan to conclude the paper, or what your expected findings will be.  The final paper can change from the draft. The purpose of the draft is to make sure you are organizing and researching your project appropriately paper will be 5-7 pages long, plus a bibliography of at least 7 sources and a cover page. The paper and bibliography will be in proper APA or MLA format and will be free from typographical or grammatical errors. Plagiarism will not be tolerated and all materials submitted will be subject to review by plagiarism detection services, so be sure to thoroughly document your paper.